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Impatient Azure
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Impatient Azure |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Impatient Azure The cross hairs of autumn bear down Arrows sped in morning mist Sudden furrows frost has kissed O’er rooftops spread to shudder blue Aligned in the voice of soft summer hue Your touch as rain Turns streams Plunging neckline low light scheme Exhaled to the psalm of a panting dream Cool cling and night scent Dribble down grace Amber ample sighs and space A lashes flutter on horizons faint Adorned in seasons yearning paint Then pull, the flash of understanding Arrows sped fall never landing Hush blue that trails low hip prevails Astir impatient azure Eagerly, for your return Copyright Kkh 9/17/07 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sweet Poet, did not we just moments ago leave winter behind? Sigh. It has been a short season... but with your impatient azure, we begin the cycle of wait, again.  |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
A wonderful write Type II poet. Its worth the work. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
A most pleasant ‘write’! I am especially fond of imagery such as: “cross hairs of autumn… ” Arrows sped in morning mist…”; “voice of soft summer hue”; “Astir impatient azure” Applause! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully penned Kathleen. Beauty of the changing seasons. *Your thoughtfulness is so much appreciated!* Heart hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: sighing along the beauty of your words, dear TD. Love, Margherita |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ There is beauty *sighing* in your ink~ LOVELY~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"The cross hairs of autumn bear down Arrows sped in morning mist Sudden furrows frost has kissed O’er rooftops spread to shudder blue" This type of day I look forward to. Great write TD!! JL  Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. ~Proverbs 22:9 NLT |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you are such an incredible poet |
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