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Tears-of-Sanity
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0 posted 2007-09-17 11:49 AM


What is "My Life"?!!

My life tells a tale...
of the present and the past...
When beauty seemed so sweet...
and ugliness could everlast...

My life is so perfect...
Yet, not very satisfying...
In this world of war and curse...
who wouldn't end up crying?!...

My life cries deep within...
for reasons that I don't know...
The tears write down...
the essence of its flow...

My life is what I make of it...
It might turn gloomy and dark...
but it might not as well...
It might, in fact, be a spark...

L.W.

Tears of Sanity~

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sky1er
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1 posted 2007-09-17 02:25 PM


my mother would agree that life is what you make of it. and sometimes i think she's right. nicely written.
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2 posted 2007-09-17 02:34 PM


LW~
That *spark* is what keeps us going~

*Huglets* to you my friend~
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2007-09-17 02:48 PM


real, heartfelt, emotive 'write!'

[Keep writing and follow that 'spark'!]


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