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Tomer
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0 posted 2007-09-16 09:51 PM



Within my tears,
Without those corners,
There stands what makes
My life a hidden crawl
And feathers the sudden
Thunder of each step
That moves closer to
The drapes of my half tinted eyes.

Its never a morning
Without the warning
Of my distant rise
From the beige hidden steps
That curtails themselves around
My baseless tone.

To each listless sound,
I bury a secret
So sound, so deep,
I can recall the moment
I grew with my age
And found my eyes
Holding hands with
My arms so neat,

I could stand again,
And smile,
Ever so meekly,
Ever so loudly.

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2007-09-17 07:35 AM


Tomer~
This is a wonderfully deep piece to wander through ... pondering on the thoughts~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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