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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2007-09-16 08:58 PM


Let me be the one to love you


I wish I could enunciate my love
So no one can misunderstand me
That my intentions are as clear as
The early January morning
But there'll be no bitter, coldness here
Only my warm arms to keep you safe

If only you would know
the way you make me feel
When you make me smile
or when I laugh... with you

If I'd ask you one thing, it be this:
Let me be the one to love you


Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos


[This message has been edited by Juju (09-16-2007 11:10 PM).]

© Copyright 2007 Juju - All Rights Reserved
Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
1 posted 2007-09-16 09:08 PM


Juju

Show me any Marine
who wouldn’t jump at the chance . . .

John



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-09-16 11:06 PM


A wonderful flow of affections...James
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2007-09-16 11:17 PM


its nice
wish i werent so jaded when i read this kind of lovestuff..if only i were a believer again

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
4 posted 2007-09-17 01:07 AM


Really nice flow, I could feel the words.  Look forward to more.

Tomer

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2007-09-17 01:24 AM


Hi, Juju. If you were to show him this sweet spill from your loving heart, he most assuredly would know.


EA

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
6 posted 2007-09-18 09:06 AM


Thank you for taking the time to read my poem

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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