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Come closer! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 (Urwald by Eduard Leonhardi) *** Come closer! *** “Come closer!” your eyes said and I heard my voice, two octaves lower than usual, muttering “yes!” I moved into your orbit and you captured me, with the authority of a black hole, sucking me in. Urban backgrounds converted into vast virgin forests where we breathed each other in mouthfuls of ardour. Our hearts drummed wildly within our ears excluding any other sound except the original sound of creation. As god and goddess we took possession of our very own Universe performing to perfection our idea of love’s heights. Alternatively we were thunder and lightning until we gave birth to the most radiant rainbow ever seen. In midst of an explosion of diamond splendour, while gazing into each other's eyes we knew we were home and witnessed Paradise. *** |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Today is a perfect day to go hiking...James |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Beautiful. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I moved into your orbit and you captured me, with the authority of a black hole, sucking me in." Margherita, I love the way your mind works and how it flows from your pen |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar' a dream of images here, of capture and rapture..enjoyed it ms |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Margherita~ Absolutely B R E A T H T A K I N G !!! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marge took the word right out of my keyboard! ~ "B R E A T H T A K I N G!!!" A  to be sure!Margherita, what a delight it will be from now on for me to see your especially sweet face, whenever I read one of your exquisite poems.  Love to you, Dear One, Linda |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
A stunning scribe... Dinah |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hi Margherita, Lovely poem. I just started posting on this site and am amazed at the quality of the poems. I tried a couple of other sites that weren't very good. I am just trying to find my way around and so far I have read some very nice work. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all my dear Poet friends for the loving comments. Love, Margherita |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Margherita...You always enchant me with your capture of light and love. I'm so happy to see your face today. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, Margherita, this is absolutuely beautiful. I loved the whole poem but especially this: "we knew we were home and witnessed Paradise." |
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nedj Member
since 2006-06-23
Posts 87Oregon USA |
Throughout this lovely read, I could not stop thinking about all the young people who would be astounded, perhaps scandalized, that anyone past their age would think such a thing, let alone write it. Yet who would we be if we left such feelings behind us as we move on, like footprints in the sand never to be seen again? What a terrible place life would become. Better we should keep the old ones and add to them at every opportunity. That joy would keep us young forever. Thank-you, Dear, for such a loving reminder. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Alternatively we were thunder and lightning until we gave birth to the most radiant rainbow ever seen. In midst of an explosion of diamond splendour, while gazing into each other's eyes we knew we were home and witnessed Paradise. ~*~ It seems a long while since I last read one of your lovely poems, m'friend. Welcome home. |
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