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Heart_not_with_the_head
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0 posted 2007-09-16 06:39 AM



Your eyes sparkle like the stars illuminating the dark sky at night
They glisten, radiating warmth like the sun.
I watch as you laugh at a funny story I tell
Your laugh is strong and draws me in
As the tide draws a wave to the shore.
My heart flutters as a  butterfly taking flight
When our fingers brush as soft as silk
The rest of the  world fades into an image
A blurred photograph,
I can’t see background scenes ,though I know they are there,
But you are the front image, crystal clear!

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Gaia
1 posted 2007-09-16 07:21 AM


a fine portrait!
Bronzeage
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2 posted 2007-09-16 03:04 PM


Very well done. Welcome to pip.
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