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Bobby Jordan
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0 posted 2007-09-15 08:59 PM


Physical beauty gallops
through Felix’s family.  

They can’t help it,
they’re just physically beautiful.  

Theirs is the kind of beauty
that sells well on the city streets.  

It helps in keeping body
and soul together.  

Oh, now what are they
going to do.  

There’s just nothing
that can be done for it.

Bobby

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1 posted 2007-09-16 09:13 PM


huh? I'm not sure what the ending implies.
Maybe it should be an early bedtime for me tonight.

Bobby Jordan
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2 posted 2007-09-17 08:36 AM


Midnitesun,

Thanks for commenting.  Sometimes physical beauty can be a problem.  You have to play the hand you're dealt, if you know what I mean.

Bobby

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3 posted 2007-09-18 05:24 PM


Glad to see another installment in the story of Felix!

applause!!

ArtSolstice
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4 posted 2007-09-18 06:33 PM


It's good to see Felix back on the blue pages. I was out in Western PA last week and when I saw those mountains I was thinking of you, Bobby.

Bobby Jordan
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5 posted 2007-09-19 01:29 PM


Secondhanddreampoet,

Yes, I have to work more on Felix.  Thanks for the kind words.

ArtSolstice,

Yes, back in old Altoona, Pa.  Lovely mountains, but other than that, I'd as soon forget the experiences there.

Thanks for thinking of me.

Bobby

Earl Brinkman
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6 posted 2010-08-26 08:04 AM


Physical beauty can cause complications it is true but that sort of beauty is only temporary.
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