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Felix's Family Beauty

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Bobby Jordan
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0 posted 09-15-2007 08:59 PM       View Profile for Bobby Jordan   Email Bobby Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bobby Jordan

Physical beauty gallops
through Felix’s family.  

They can’t help it,
they’re just physically beautiful.  

Theirs is the kind of beauty
that sells well on the city streets.  

It helps in keeping body
and soul together.  

Oh, now what are they
going to do.  

There’s just nothing
that can be done for it.

Bobby
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Midnitesun
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1 posted 09-16-2007 09:13 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

huh? I'm not sure what the ending implies.
Maybe it should be an early bedtime for me tonight.
Bobby Jordan
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2 posted 09-17-2007 08:36 AM       View Profile for Bobby Jordan   Email Bobby Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bobby Jordan

Midnitesun,

Thanks for commenting.  Sometimes physical beauty can be a problem.  You have to play the hand you're dealt, if you know what I mean.

Bobby
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Glad to see another installment in the story of Felix!

applause!!
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4 posted 09-18-2007 06:33 PM       View Profile for ArtSolstice   Email ArtSolstice   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for ArtSolstice

It's good to see Felix back on the blue pages. I was out in Western PA last week and when I saw those mountains I was thinking of you, Bobby.
Bobby Jordan
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Secondhanddreampoet,

Yes, I have to work more on Felix.  Thanks for the kind words.

ArtSolstice,

Yes, back in old Altoona, Pa.  Lovely mountains, but other than that, I'd as soon forget the experiences there.

Thanks for thinking of me.

Bobby
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Physical beauty can cause complications it is true but that sort of beauty is only temporary.
 
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