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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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I am impatient with your words and the absence of your voice the flattery and simplicity of how you speak to me. Forgive me, my tongue is dry and I am tired of being straightforward. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and now you are becoming an "elusive" butterfly! ~ with a pen to match!   EA |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Forgive me, my tongue is dry and I am tired of being straightforward." ouch nicely done! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
I heard that! You go girl! nice write. Amy  "Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away" |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hi allysa. Sometimes I go back through the poems and pick a good one that I didn't get a chance to read and bring it back. Tag... you're it. This is my gift to some special poets. Ida |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Quick, simple, direct and very well written... jwesley |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
always outstanding. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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