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Chosen one
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0 posted 2007-09-15 11:36 AM


                      


           Fallen leaves

         Falling leaves, fall down from the sky
      with colors of orange like sweet pumpkin pie
          fall is near, oh the people do cheer
        By the fallen leaves, fall is really here

          we smell the sweet pumpkin spice
        you know you want it, like little mice
          we love the colors of the leaves
       fall is here better role down your sleeves

        Falling leaves, fall down from the sky
      with colors of orange like sweet pumpkin pie
          fall is near, oh the people do cheer
        By the fallen leaves, fall is really here
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TomMark
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1 posted 2007-09-15 12:09 PM


beautiful. a beautiful song of fall.

enjoyed

Tomtoo

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-09-15 12:22 PM


Hello, Chosen! I love the fall ~ and your sweet autumnal poem, perfectly ~ and poetically ~ illustrates why that is so.

Giving you a warm, autumnal hug,

EA

paradise islands
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since 2007-09-15
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3 posted 2007-09-15 02:56 PM


wow, this is a very nice poem!

i love how this poem brings such visions of the fall, and the sweet pumpkin pie

very good job

Chosen one
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since 2007-09-13
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4 posted 2007-09-15 02:59 PM


why thank you Linda!

i love your poetry, and to see you reply to my poems is a blessing, thankyou  

Chosen one
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5 posted 2007-09-15 03:00 PM


Tom mark


as we are newbies, its hard

but thank you for reviewing my poem

thank you ever so much

Chosen one
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since 2007-09-13
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6 posted 2007-09-15 03:02 PM


paradise islands-

thank you so ever much!

i love that people enjoy my poems

i cant wait to read yours. i just found out that you joined today!
well, welcome

this is only my third day

thank you again

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-09-15 06:47 PM


Nice...this changing of the seasons...James
A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 2007-09-17 02:12 AM




Have a Happy Fall!

~HUGS ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

Chosen one
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since 2007-09-13
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9 posted 2007-09-17 04:51 PM


Thank you

ARH!

thank you so very much!

Chosen one
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since 2007-09-13
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10 posted 2007-09-17 04:51 PM


James Michael,

thank you alot!

i am so happy fall is near


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