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come back in summer's curious shadow |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OXanHvrjQO0 well attested trees undressing charms a now wounded warrior twas sweet of tune once in june & july ardent or’ dark blue waters like curious lights that warmed a lover’s kiss forever lost forever lost through cooling eyes of gentle visions enchanting stringed pinnacle until the last brilliant sky shown final... darling sages silent tunes reaching out sweet melodies sound of calm waves on an endless beach I weep amd weep now for solitude cloaked by night tears swallowing what seems for the first time a cold sea and thoughts thoughts of you ignites a pulse within one darling sage restless smooth tune of thought tis charming passion jeweled and firm like the last rose of summer breathing deeply under my skin where shadows call wondrous knowing the losses you recite your own love songs that come back to find you melodic sonnets of twilight summers inquire the chorus of gentle winds even hewn peaceful whispers find their way sweet murmurs lay across emerald stone scattering throughts of a final kiss to nowhere and somewhere in veil of sighs promise that lives within crystalline prose of pen whispering love once again my love you touch my redened hair embrace my breast as if yours from that dear lovely emotion you brave a soul’s embrace finding peace no other life hath known or’ thunderous echoes in granite halls in a place deeply hidden within our souls don't let go [This message has been edited by LeeJ (09-14-2007 07:22 PM).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...alas, though I've never grasped with any save my heart, it has never let you go, dear friend - never since day-1, a while ago. And the heart - my heart, never lets go. j. Love the you-tube link...have listened to her a play number of times. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lee, I was so happy to see that you had posted a poem this evening! Every single mot was alluring and sensual. I adored each line! I enjoy all sides to your writing talent! Giving you a huge appreciative HUG of love, Linda P.S. That Celtic music certainly stirred my Celtic blood! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh, my Oh, my Oh, my You continue to grow You continue to inspire You continue to amaze and an extraordinary title, too Thank you'for your poetry Liz |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“well attested trees undressing charms a now wounded warrior twas sweet of tune once in june & july ardent or’ dark blue waters like curious lights that warmed a lover’s kiss forever lost forever lost through cooling eyes of gentle visions enchanting stringed pinnacle until the last brilliant sky shown final...” Amazing write, Lee J. Love the Celtic music especially Scarborough Fair, Somewhere Over The Rainbow, and of course Danny Boy Ireland. You PIPed-up my evening… JL  Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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IntoTheRain Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 51Westwood, CA |
I really enjoyed your approach to this poem. Your style and method of delivery were refreshingly different. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting ‘write’! Wonderful title! I am especially fond of such fine word-painted imagery as: “thunderous echoes in granite halls in a place deeply hidden within our souls”; “silent tunes reaching out sweet melodies sound of calm waves on an endless beach”; AND: “peaceful whispers find their way sweet murmurs lay across emerald stone scattering thoughts of a final kiss(!)” Applause!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, yes, yes... you sit the fringe of her skirts and twirl, and swirl and listen to the wind... and you dance, oh you dance and words almost do you justice, but you wring them just so and you become more than words... you tswirl....  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Lee Most excellent, beautiful and a joy to read - words falling like smooth drops of water. Beautiful. A |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
LeeJ - I always enjoy trailing down your words - exquisite words - and the music was pretty awesome too. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: your poems, dear LeeJ, always capture me with their incredible intensity, this one too. You wrap the reader in the emotion of words found deep within. Love, Margherita |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"once again my love you touch my redened hair embrace my breast as if yours" and once again LeeJ you capture the eye and the heart with your extraodinary words and the title is extravagant! |
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