Open Poetry #41 |
Waiting |
sky1er Junior Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 16Peru, currently |
Not sure what I'm doing here. Seems this thing happened again, this thing where I was confused and now I am just waiting. I thought it was lunchtime 45 minutes ago. But they are still there, heads bent, crunching their numbers, reading their reports. I am hungry. Could it be that half of 12 is really half? Or half again more? Or if I don't eat this noon, the flesh on my sides will slide away and he will have nothing to hold onto? He says he likes it. The flesh. Yes, I am hungry. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Skyler~ I want to WELCOME you to this friendly Circle of Poets and Friends~ Enjoy your stay ... from so far away ... this circle widens to take you in~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well this was just wonderful...LOVED the way you walked the fringes in this... Terrific write... jwesley |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Peru, currently.... I enjoyed that before I even enjoyed your fringed poem. Well done! Welcome to Passions in Poetry. Please, check your Email for a Very Special Welcome! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, sky! I see that you are from Peru! That's curious because I enjoyed 'peru-sing' your poem! "the flesh on my sides will slide away and he will have nothing to hold onto?" ~ That would never do! I'm sending you some angel hair pasta smothered in my heavenly sauce, via angel air express! That should give him something "to hold onto". Giving you a warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Welcome... I enjoyed your first post and hope you get to eat soon! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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sky1er Junior Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 16Peru, currently |
Thanks for the welcome. And the thoughts of pasta. To make up for the long wait, I overate. So at least "he" won't have to reevaluate his feelings... |
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