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Heart_not_with_the_head
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since 2007-09-14

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Australia

0 posted 2007-09-14 06:53 AM

Moving on

Your love is a lighthouse beacon

Guiding me safely

Through the violent waves rolling

And thrashing in the sea of life.

A strong undercurrent attempts to drag me

Back to a place I no longer wish to be

The shore I left from now far away in the distance

Guide me through the rocks that continue to graze my heart

Love’s past hurts like open sores on my body

Feel every jag of the rocks

Until your light guides me to a safe passage

Then I’m able to rest on the soft sand

Basking in your glow

As my wounds heal.

This is the first poem I have ever written. It was written after making a decision on a path my life should take. Sadly I walked the path for a while but have since returned to the place i came from.That too was my choice for many appropriate reasons.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2007-09-14 07:39 AM

Welcome Annabelle! Heartfelt and romantic poetry, looking forward to reading more!

~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2007-09-14 07:41 AM

A lovely first post Annabelle. Welcome to Pip place, I hope you enjoy your time here.

I'm so happy that I can't stop cryin, I'm so happy that I'm laughing through my tears...TK

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2007-09-14 08:44 AM

Annabelle~
WELCOME to the PiP Circle of Poets and Friends~

Quite a descriptive emote for your first poem~
Glad you are here to share with us~

Enjoy your stay ... there are many wonderfully talented poets here to read~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com
[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (09-15-2007 10:30 AM).]

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2007-09-14 08:59 AM

Welcome to Passions in Poetry
You'll surely be glad you joined our wonderful community.
This is a great entry, and we look forward to lots more

Check your email for a special greeting

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

5 posted 2007-09-14 11:09 AM

Welcome.

I enjoyed your poem and, also, look forward to reading more.

Alison

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

6 posted 2007-09-14 11:56 AM

"This is the first poem I have ever written."

~ Well, you certainly could have fooled me! In all sincerity, that was downright 'poetical'!

As Dorothy in the Wizard of Oz said, "There's no place like home! There's no place like home!"

Be well! Be happy!

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,

Earth Angel

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2007-09-15 10:19 AM

Wonderful...James

adagio
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Marrero, La.

8 posted 2007-09-15 12:14 PM

A great and inspirational piece of work.
I certainly will be adding this to my library
adagio

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

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LA,CA

9 posted 2007-09-15 12:19 PM

very beautiful and welcome to piptalk!!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia

10 posted 2007-09-15 01:29 PM

Welcome to our blue pages... lovely first post!

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Gemini
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since 1999-12-15

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Wisconsin, USA

11 posted 2007-09-15 10:32 PM

Welcome! This is a very lovely write.

WindWalker
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12 posted 2007-09-16 01:27 AM

Yes, this was a lovely write!!!!

Midnitesun

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Gaia

13 posted 2007-09-16 07:23 AM

What a beautiful entrance to these blue pages.
I am looking forward to more from your quill, and am delighted you've chosen to share your thoughts.

Heart_not_with_the_head
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since 2007-09-14

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Australia

14 posted 2007-09-16 07:31 AM

Thank you all for your encouraging words. Im so much more motivated to begin expressing myself in poetry.I have always loved reading poetrybut I was hesitant to construct my own , feeling I had no skill but now im eager to try.

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

15 posted 2007-09-16 02:32 PM

Beautiful write of love and the guiding light

Hope

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