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Open Poetry #41

Guilty Tricks

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

0 posted 2007-09-14 03:22 AM

You lick your lips,
taste the karma.
Like when icing sugar turns to water
and trickles down your chin
leaving a sticky reminder of what's been.
You lick your lips,
taste the karma.
Like a pair of cookie cutter fingers
etching out the wrong.
Your nights together last too long.
You lick your lips,
taste the karma.
A sweet malicious venom turning back the time,
A slaved at apple pie burnt right down the line.
Guilty tricks taste so sweet
Karma's come and licked your treat.
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Havent wrote a poem in a long time
I'm a little rusty.

-Ash-

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2007-09-14 08:37 AM

Welcome back! I enjoyed your icing metaphor, and hope to read more from you! Rusty? Well, some must rust more gracefully than others then, for I think you have much talent!

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