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Gumpy
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0 posted 2007-11-14 07:11 PM



It hurts me so to think of this
Your lips and mine not meant to kiss

It hurts me so to think that we
A love so strong not meant to be

And even though it hurts me so
I hold our love and won't let go.

Gumpy

Heartbroken

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Artic Wind
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1 posted 2007-11-14 07:14 PM


Very Sad

ARCTIC WIND

aziza
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2 posted 2007-11-14 07:40 PM


Yes, it's sad but ... maybe by letting go, we find what is right for us.  Lovely poem.

Alison

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-11-15 03:37 AM


I can remember at least one time when I let go because it was tormenting me, and I weighed the torment and thought that it would be less if I let go...James
iliana
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4 posted 2007-11-15 08:09 AM


This with a dozen red roses might work......jo
Gumpy
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5 posted 2007-11-15 08:47 AM


Thank you all for your words, they mean a lot.


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Earth Angel
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6 posted 2007-11-15 02:01 PM


Those who are gentle, loving, sensitive, and tender-heart, hurt the most when they are not loved as deeply as they love.

I pray that your sadness will lessen and be replaced with happiness. Perhaps by the ending of one relationship, you will be freed up for a new love to come into your life.

Loving, comforting, hug,

EA

Gumpy
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7 posted 2007-11-15 02:32 PM


Thank you Angel.
Your words mean much and I look forward to seeing them.
Thank you.
Gumpy

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2007-11-18 12:09 PM


And even though it hurts me so
I hold our love and won't let go.

sad words here... but I think there is a message that says... "I'm going to love you forever" ... that in itself is beautiful!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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9 posted 2007-11-18 02:46 AM


wow this was really good, It was so beautiful, such strong words
Krysti

Gumpy
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10 posted 2007-11-18 03:16 AM


Thank you Roniece.
You're right it does, I do, and I will continue to.
Thank you

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Gumpy
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11 posted 2007-11-18 03:18 AM


Thank you hunnie_girl.
I appreciate you taking the time to read and reply.
Many thank u's

Heartbroken

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