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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-09-12 01:30 AM



i like remote places
cool, sunny days
and hearing the silence
with each exploratory touch

watching the face change
listening to breath quicken
and slow kisses
as the wind brushes bared skin


Alison

[This message has been edited by aziza (09-12-2007 02:22 AM).]

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-09-12 01:34 AM


Me likeee tooo!

Another sweet write from a sweet poetess!

Loving hug,
Linda

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
2 posted 2007-09-12 02:24 AM


Linda

You bring me so many smiles.

Alison

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
3 posted 2007-09-12 06:27 AM


remote places
like hollywood
and vine
during rush hour
and a stranger
with eyes closed

enjoyed your view ms

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2007-09-12 04:06 PM


Me too...James
TomMark
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LA,CA
5 posted 2007-09-12 05:29 PM


very good. Beautiful

enjoyed

Tomtoo

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
6 posted 2007-09-12 06:09 PM


concise and excellent 'write'

serious applause!!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2007-09-12 06:51 PM


I feel the same...nicely expressed~~

M

vandana
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USA
8 posted 2007-09-12 07:36 PM


good read
The Lady
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The Southwest
9 posted 2007-09-12 10:28 PM



oh that silence Alison
says so much

beauty


aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
10 posted 2007-09-13 12:17 PM


You know

another thing I like is you, and you, and you .. and you too .. I like it here and I thank you all for taking the time to let me know you enjoyed this poem.

xoxoxo
the liking lots Alison

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