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LindsayP
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0 posted 2007-09-11 10:13 PM



                 DREAMS

Dreams to us all are a wonderful thing,
An intrinsic part of our life,
We dream of fortune, fulfilment and fame,
Of a world that is minus of strife.

There are those that dream of paradise,
Of  riches at the rainbows end,
Or far away places with strange sounding names,
Or just to live life through with a friend.

In a dream you can see a beautiful girl,
Her face creased in a beautiful smile,
Then the smile flutters and falters and fades away,
Like the mists on some Ithican Isle.

The business man dreams of power & wealth,
Of control of the fortunes of men,
To holiday in a yacht of his own
Or to own a gleaming new benz.

A girl will dream of a lover to come,
Of the day when she walks down the aisle,
On the arm of a father whose bursting with pride,
And all the faces that are lit by a smile.

An old man will dream of a sunny sky,
Of the days when he enjoyed his prime,
He dreams of the good things in life that are free
And just to live one day at a time.

Most of us live in a world of our own,
Or that’s the way to me that it seems,
Life is far better with faith in oneself,
When it’s bolstered up with our dreams.


© Copyright 2007 Lindsay P Wilson - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-09-12 06:23 AM


I've woken up a few times with a smile on my face, thanks to dreams...James
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-09-12 09:11 AM


Lindsay, what a treat to read!

I enjoyed the two opening lines ~

"Dreams to us all are a wonderful thing,
An intrinsic part of our life,"

all

the

way

down

to the two closing lines.

"Life is far better with faith in oneself,
When it’s bolstered up with our dreams."

Dare to dream!


EA

LindsayP
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3 posted 2007-09-12 09:48 PM



JamesMichael, What a wonderful thing it is

to wake up with a smile on your face. If my poem helped to enhance that smile then I am more than satisfied. Thank you.

LindsayP

LindsayP
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4 posted 2007-09-12 09:56 PM



Thank you Earth Angel

Dreams are an intrinsic part of our life and no matter what happens to us along life's rugged path it is always a boost to our spirit to have some wonderful dreams.
Have a great day and thanks again.

LindsayP

JL
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5 posted 2007-09-15 11:22 AM


"An old man will dream of a sunny sky,
Of the days when he enjoyed his prime,
He dreams of the good things in life that are free
And just to live one day at a time.

Most of us live in a world of our own,
Or that’s the way to me that it seems,
Life is far better with faith in oneself,
When it’s bolstered up with our dreams."


Love this!
Great write "dreams".

JL


Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

LindsayP
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6 posted 2007-09-15 09:47 PM



Thanks JL for your kind response, glad you enjoyed it, much appreciated.

LindsayP

Rick
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7 posted 2007-09-16 03:34 PM


Hi Lindsay, enjoyed this poem my friend, funny I was reading a book last night called dreams that Sheryl gave me, glad you are enjoying the poetry site, have a great day.

Rick

Honeybunch
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8 posted 2007-09-16 03:45 PM


"Life is far better with faith in oneself,
When it’s bolstered up with our dreams."

Yes, well said!  Enjoyed the read.

LindsayP
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9 posted 2007-09-16 09:44 PM



Thanks Rick,

It's always good to get your kind remarks.

LindsayP

LindsayP
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10 posted 2007-09-16 09:49 PM



Honey Bunch,

It gave me quite a thrill to get an accolade from far away in Africa. I love your country and have had three wonderful holidays over there. Thank you very much.

Have a great day,  LindsayP

Marchmadness
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11 posted 2007-09-17 07:27 PM


Very nice, Lindsey
LindsayP
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12 posted 2007-09-19 10:06 PM



Marchmadness Thank you for your kind

response    LindsayP

Earl Brinkman
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13 posted 2010-08-15 08:26 AM


I too dream for things and I guess that I am not alone.  Let`s dream.
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