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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2007-09-11 08:58 PM


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The whole day somehow
Devolves to three sparrows

But tomorrow—is another day


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Bobby Jordan
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since 2007-08-13
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1 posted 2007-09-11 09:57 PM


Not bad, short but sweet.  I like it.

Bobby

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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2 posted 2007-09-12 05:46 PM



The entire night, by the way
wasted on the single moon

Only yesterday-a cloudy night

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