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I Could Not
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I Could Not |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
“I Could Not” Yet, even though I had so much to say, I could not, should not, would not, write today. For though I know my heart was all a glow, I could not, should not, would not, let it show. I saw her standing in the gold moonbeams. I could not, should not, would not, end the dreams. She sang to me and set my soul aflame. I could not, should not, would not, be restrained. I held her in my arms so close to me. I could not, should not, would not, set her free. Because I long to hold and love her so, I could not, should not, would not, let her go. MoonShadow . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
She is a lucky lady to be held in such a way Sir Kenneth. Nicely done, softly smiling, and very much, enjoyed. after a fall I get back up, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wonderful style. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You shouldn't, wouldn't, couldn't, and I agree....True Love only happens once in a lifetime!  Warm Hugs~ ARH You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (09-13-2007 03:14 AM).] |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
gentle Sir MoonShadow if you could not, should not, would not I hope you did not this is delightful and speaks volumes |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I especially enjoyed the following lines: ~ "For though I know my heart was all a glow," ~ "I saw her standing in the gold moonbeams." ~ "She sang to me and set my soul aflame." ~ "I held her in my arms so close to me." ~ "Because I long to hold and love her so, I could not, should not, would not, let her go." Ooops! It appears that all of the lines are my favourites!   EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Let the love flow...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful... Hugs flowing out to you.. Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
beautiful and beautiful!!! enjoyed Tomtoo |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Strong emotions evoked with the repetition of would not, should not and could nots...  enjoyed. |
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mommakrzan New Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 2 |
MOONShadow, remembering my comments about me not having any discernable talents...my main thought was WOULDA, SHOULDA, COULDA ! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Moon Shadow, with a love like that I hope you never let her go, very romantic, much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
beautiful!!! Tom |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very unique and totally enjoyable... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
So lovely ~ your poetry lingers with me and makes me smile. Alison |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
VERY Wonderful Indeed ARCTIC WIND |
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