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Open Poetry #41

Gloss

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2007-09-11 09:46 AM

Gloss

fairies ride
on the backs
of dragonflies
drinking next
to diamonds
in mud puddles
after rainstorms
even thunder
can bring gloss

"no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

1 posted 2007-09-11 10:18 AM

I really enjoy the winsome quality of this poem. It's lovely and makes me smile and feel hope grow for better. Better what? Just -- better.

A

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2007-09-11 10:25 PM

delightful Helen

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2007-09-12 06:29 AM

or in chevies
sipping from memories
that ooze the radio

ms slick
you are greasy good

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

4 posted 2007-09-12 05:49 PM

interesting !!!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2007-09-13 07:45 AM

OneSlick~
I like the imagery of this piece~
Lighthearted ... with your creative originality~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2007-09-14 08:29 PM

Ah Slick ... another one of you...

j.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2007-10-09 05:56 PM

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

8 posted 2007-10-09 07:26 PM

Helen,

I'm sorry I almost missed this one.
With your permission I would like
to add it to my Word file of poems
by others.

It's very good.

John

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