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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2007-09-10 01:26 PM

Picture perfect particles
of present/past pursuits
appear like a puzzle pack
and promulgate a ponder
of this Pandora’s box.

The poor and pathetic
present as shaky pillars
whilst platforms of the powerful
portray a predetermined pose
that pales to insignificance
the petty and the paltry.

But pat the past, pat-pat-pat,
and pour the present so
to pad and puff the mind
with a personal pact
to preserve in perpetuity
the programmed powerful.

To the Panoramic future phase
perhaps perchance perceive
a portfolio of possibilities
for the pander to a “me”
by the place of pose and poise
precisely and particularly
in a peaceful paradise!

Helen / 10 September 2007

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2007-09-10 01:27 PM

I LOVE This. Written wonderfully Helen!

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2007-09-10 01:33 PM

Thanks, GS! Still a few to go if I aim to make my way through the alphabet but as for the xyz's, I'm thinking not.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2007-09-10 02:56 PM

I am partial to poems posed by a particular poetess! ~ Yours!

Pats on your patellas,

Pearth Pangel

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2007-09-10 03:04 PM

Pearth Pangel - and, indeed, by any other name you are still a... sweetie pie!

Thanks, Linda.

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

5 posted 2007-09-10 10:19 PM

Lovely linguistic lyrics and literary alliterations.
Congratulations!

MoonShadow
.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2007-09-10 11:25 PM

Prolific, perfect “P” presentation; pouring, portraying “P” plethora.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2007-09-11 12:51 PM

Thanks, Moon Shadow and JL! I appreciate the read and your comments.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2007-09-11 09:18 AM

Helen~
I adore this ... as another who loves sifting through the sandbox of the alphabet~

I'll see if I can dig up one from the archives and perhaps do a repost~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

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