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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-09-10 05:20 AM



Inquiries

Met her in Macy's on a Thursday night,
trying on fashion dresses a retailers delight.
Her claim to fame was a perfect size four
and red ruby lips a man could kiss and adore.
She called out to me the third time I walked by,
said she admired my muscles and she wasn't shy.
As she felt my biceps so big and so hard
she inquired if I had a Macy's charge card.

JamesLee
10Septembre
2007





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LindsayP
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1 posted 2007-09-11 11:40 PM



JamesMichael, Reading this poem brought back fond memories to me, as my wife and I enjoyed some shopping in Maceys just on fifty years ago, Great poem.
LindsayP

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-09-12 05:57 AM


thank you Lindsay for the nice response...Macys is one of my girlfriends favorite stores...we were teasing about it a few days ago...James
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3 posted 2007-09-13 07:51 AM


JamesMichael~
You pen levity with this one~
We enjoy your memories~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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4 posted 2007-09-13 12:27 PM


enjoyed
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