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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-09-10 01:20 AM



Done

Where is this road
taking us?
Do you really
want to be with me,
or are we just
holding on desperately,
or is it foolishly
to something thats
already done.

JamesLee
09September
2007



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The Lady
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1 posted 2007-09-11 10:38 PM



often happens James
but I hope it's not true for you

nicely done

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-09-12 05:46 AM


Thank you Lady for the nice response...it was a subject of discussion...but no where near to done...sometimes I explore my insecurities...to reassure myself...especially important when object of affection is far away...James
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2007-09-12 03:48 PM


well your words keep that "object of affection" near  

M

TomMark
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4 posted 2007-09-12 05:29 PM


NO matter what, it is the love.

enjoyed as always

Tomtoo

vandana
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5 posted 2007-09-12 07:37 PM


good one
MoonShadow
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6 posted 2007-09-12 09:11 PM


Hold as close and as tight as you can in your heart.
Embrace and love as strong as you can in your dreams.
Distance is relative... and the spirit covers the span.
    Peace, Love and faith will stay the course.

             MoonShadow
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JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-09-13 03:24 PM


Thank you nakthoughts, Tom, vandana and Moon Shadow for the nice responses...James
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