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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-09-09 08:51 PM


        "Universalism"

Follow the Autumn wind boldly
toward a softly setting sun
in a evening-perfect sky.

An opulent-orange moon
rising over your shoulder
sings to the mountains
   and forest,
gathering our dreams…
beyond the crush of Time.

Let your sad, tired mind
bathe in the moonlight
   and shadows.

Attend to the whisperings
of Nature’s universal truths!


© Copyright 2007 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2007-09-09 09:03 PM


oh, but this is exactly
what I needed to read tonight

~whispering a thank you, poet~

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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LA,CA
2 posted 2007-09-09 09:07 PM


A true gifted poet. Again, a very beautiful poem.
love to read as always

Tomtoo

Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion
3 posted 2007-09-10 12:54 PM


enjoyed

I am the little cracked mirror

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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4 posted 2007-09-10 03:02 PM


I so needed to read something peaceful today...thank you, poet.

after a fall I get back up,
move on 'cause the past is the past and theres no tomorrow if remaining in still waters while the river flows on ~dsmith

The Lady
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The Southwest
5 posted 2007-09-10 03:36 PM




"Let your sad, tired mind
bathe in the moonlight
   and shadows."

this is so appealing poet


ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18
Posts 498

6 posted 2007-09-10 10:52 PM


In addition to exquisite imaging, this is quite wonderful:

"gathering our dreams…
beyond the crush of Time."


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