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Perfect Illusion

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Tears-of-Sanity
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Perfect Illusion:  The True Friend!

***Well everyone.. That was my first. English is not my native language, and I self-educated myself. Hope I get your opinions Thank you!***


You taught me how to smile...
while my heart screams with pain
You listened to my silly words...
yet, never chose to complain

You said: "The secret is simple...
that you ought to know
It is to know the meaning...
of neglect and slough..."

Knowing how to always hide that painful sigh...
although life treats you tough
and always keeping your spirits high...
Even though, that is somehow rough

You saved me from a world of darkness...
and lead me back to the light
You helped me fight my sorrows...
and brought me back my sight

You are my shelter in the rain...
You take my hand in yours fading away my pain...
With you I feel safe and calm no matter who you are...
You've always been the healer & paled my invisible scars...

You are someone I'll always defend...
With all my powers because you are my one true friend...
You are my perfect ILLUSION!

Tears of Sanity

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 09-08-2007 06:39 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed reading this...James
Honeybunch
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2 posted 09-08-2007 07:25 AM       View Profile for Honeybunch   Email Honeybunch   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Honeybunch's Home Page   View IP for Honeybunch

Hmm?  No "illusion" could do all that for you so my guess is that it's absolutely real!     Enjoyed where your words took me.
Tears-of-Sanity
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3 posted 09-09-2007 12:47 AM       View Profile for Tears-of-Sanity   Email Tears-of-Sanity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tears-of-Sanity

Thank you..
What I meant here is that I am almost 21 years old now and I have never had a true friend.  I trid to find that in people, and then I got nothing.  I made up an imaginary friend who is not even a doll but an illusion that only I can see (or imagine)
I talked to her, played with her and did a lot with her. Surprisingly everything went to the better.  My grades went up, my personality had changed and my life turned upside down.  that is the story of the illusion who changed my life.

I am glad that you liked the poem ^^'    
thank you

Tears of Sanity

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 09-10-2007 08:24 AM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

A very real, heartfelt, emotive ‘write’!

A most warm welcome to the fine blue pages of ‘P.I.P.-land’!
Earth Angel
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5 posted 09-12-2007 01:33 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Hi, there! Welcome aboard the pip ship!

I once heard that those who make up an imaginary friend, tend to be highly intelligent and creative!

I enjoyed your debut post!

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,

Earth Angel
Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 09-12-2007 06:01 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Welcome aboard the Pip ship, I understood this poem very well.  Well done, much enjoyed.
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7 posted 09-12-2007 09:56 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Welcome! It is no illusion, you can make friends here at Pips.
I enjoyed your first post and look forward to more!
LindsayP
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Tears of Sanity, when you write poetry you automatically become friends with all the other poets. I loved your poem and hope you keep on writing many more. Well done.

LindsayP
TomMark
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9 posted 09-13-2007 01:44 AM       View Profile for TomMark   Email TomMark   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TomMark

Enjoyed your poem and your story.

Tomtoo
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10 posted 09-13-2007 12:25 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

L.W.~
A sincere and hearty WELCOME to the PiP Circle of poets and friends~

Following the light offered in friendship,
is a sure way to get a new glow~

Here's a little *gift* for you~



*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -     noles1@totcon.com   
vandana
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11 posted 09-13-2007 12:26 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

welcome to passions enjoyed
Angel4aKing
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12 posted 04-07-2008 02:33 PM       View Profile for Angel4aKing   Email Angel4aKing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel4aKing

WOW! Welcome to passions! I am really glad I stopped by this week and didn't miss this one.
Take care,

~~~kingsangel~~~

Tears-of-Sanity
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13 posted 04-07-2008 11:24 PM       View Profile for Tears-of-Sanity   Email Tears-of-Sanity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tears-of-Sanity

Thank you, I am honored to have the angel read my poetry and leave a comment ^^!

Tears of Sanity~

Earl Brinkman
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14 posted 09-02-2010 01:36 AM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

I enjoyed your poem.  I hope that your illusion has become a reality.
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