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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2007-09-07 01:30 PM


       Autumn Forest

The faint Fall twilight
is refreshed by gentle mist
and the quiet footfall-cadence
of Time passing…
in this forest of dreams
where lies are unnecessary.

A frosty moon and Autumn
  breeze
whisper earnest truths.

The cool-clear mind and heart
  attend!

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (09-07-2007 04:47 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2007-09-07 02:14 PM



"where lies
are unnecessary"

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (09-07-2007 05:39 PM).]

Margherita
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2 posted 2007-09-07 08:19 PM


A cool-clear mind makes us able to be more profoundly aware of the beauty surrounding us.

Very beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2007-09-07 09:15 PM


only truths
when summer rounds the corner
and bows to autumn

Kahlil
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4 posted 2007-09-07 09:43 PM


Oh, this really touches my senses.  
I think it is my favorite of yours now.

LindsayP
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5 posted 2007-09-07 10:11 PM



The best poem of yours that I've read

Great poem.    LindsayP

ArtSolstice
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6 posted 2007-09-07 11:23 PM


Perfect!

TomMark
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7 posted 2007-09-08 12:03 PM


every heart wants to be in this pure world. beautiful as always

Tomtoo

secondhanddreampoet
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8 posted 2007-09-08 03:01 AM


A profound thanks to all the fine 'P.I.P.' authors who added a
'comment/reply' post to this 'write' [this 'poem' was rather 'special
and important' to me in many ways for many reasons]

I believe it came rather close to where I want to be with my 'poetry'!

Tears-of-Sanity
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9 posted 2007-09-09 01:55 AM


very nice
I like it a lot

Tears of Sanity

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