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Open Poetry #41

A Neglected Feel

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-09-06 10:48 AM

A Neglected Feel

Exhaustion ruling the obvious,
a head above the rest.
In their blinded moment,
compromise a non issue,
as the last breath is spoken
and one is undermined.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2007-09-06 10:51 AM

~feeling you, here, my friend~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2007-09-06 10:55 AM

feeling just this very thing today M. Hugs comin atcha'

after a fall I get back up,
move on 'cause the past is the past and theres no tomorrow if remaining in still waters while the river flows on ~dsmith

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

3 posted 2007-09-06 11:28 AM

Sometimes exhaustion isn’t obvious,
At least to those that are oblivious
Removed from caring and sharing
Their aloofness emotionally tearing,
But eventually there will return a smile,
Their time will pass away in a while

Gloom

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2007-09-06 06:38 PM

I feel a part of me has been stolen away~~

I don't know what will re energize me.
Thank you for your kind words.

M

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2007-09-06 07:03 PM

May you be aware of how much you are loved. This keeps us able to cope with all the challenges of our life.
Very powerful write.
I know this feeling too, but thanks to God it is always temporary.
Love and hugs.
Margherita

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2007-09-10 07:02 PM

Margherita, thanks for the sweet response...I am still waiting for this temporary feeling to leave me~~

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