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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-09-06 06:33 AM



painting directions for the winds
on the jade house side of vesper dunes
away from jalipino forests

where ant bob dotes her nails
and drums hollow tapestries
from the angel skins of aphids

there rests the minds of beggars
wearing their earthen capes
and showing shoe bottom nudity

as they pretend to be me in stereo
the rugged rug of man and ink
waiting for another whispered peaking

when the red blush warms benaro's ha

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daark

scribblenote..ok..so it is watching peppers grow in a greenhouse...anything is better than oprah

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2007-09-06 07:16 AM


Am sure that the insect world at times has more to offer than some of what is offered on todays tv D.  You my friend, could write about nothing but a brick wall and still, I know it would be interesting. Just goes to prove my point...talent m'friend....You abound in it, and in oh so many ways.     
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2007-09-06 07:46 AM


A reader could read this backwards,
and it is just as intriguing.

I think I'll try inside out
next time...



bel1e
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since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631

3 posted 2007-09-06 07:58 AM


LOL~watching peppers grow?

~this is great, dark~
~beLLe

  

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2007-09-06 07:10 PM


quote:
the rugged rug of man and ink
waiting for another whispered peaking




love that!

Ants and aphids make me itchy, but your poem is a treat!

Love,
Margherita

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
5 posted 2007-09-06 09:24 PM


down on oprah huh?
*grin*

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
6 posted 2007-09-07 06:27 AM


ms donna, thank you lady

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ms sun, your eyes are always there, thank you

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ms bel1e, thank you daughter dear for your grins

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ms mar' you bless me lady friend

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ms inky, not even if she asked me..(grin)

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