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Open Poetry #41

Waiting For You

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2007-09-06 12:57 PM

Death may come,
taking me on,
never will I die,

living inside,
your soul, burning,
eternal flames,

Here I will be,
waiting for you,
calling you home,

To wrap you inside,
my feather wings,
of warmth and love,

Our Love so true,
lasting forever,
I will wait for you....

come my darling,

Come to me SOON!

.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2007-09-06 09:20 AM

Now don't you be in any hurry to get to the Other Side. You and your poetry are still needed down here.

The depth of your love is almost palpable with these impassioned words. It is apparent that when you love, it is deep and consuming. You truly do have a romantic heart.

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

2 posted 2007-09-06 11:07 AM

i see clouds when i read this poem ... floating love : ) <3

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2007-09-06 11:09 AM

A beautiful plea of love ARH. Nicely done.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-09-06 04:26 PM

A nice piece of love from your heart...love for today and hope for the future...I like this...a lot...James

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2007-09-07 01:21 AM

Thanks to all who have replied!

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