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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
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South Africa

0 posted 2007-09-05 05:49 AM


Strut-strut, peck-peck, this ground’s a mess
and the chicken knows
Farmer Brown has sold his life
to the devil’s own
for however long it takes
to evolve into the soul.

And how the wind of circumstances
blows sustenance around
in force of change and movement
but no. no. no. no chicken he
to follow mindlessly
to get to where he should have been
eons ago.

So blows the wind the storm of need
into that farmer’s mind
but, tut-tut-tut, no matter, love
vegetarians don’t feed
on what another needs.

Farmer Brown, the chicken knows
it leaves a trail where’er it goes
but jiggle, wiggle, so the feet
to overstep the known
and evolve into the soul!

Helen / 5 September 2007


© Copyright 2007 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2007-09-06 12:40 PM


What's good for the chicken might be bad for the Farmer.
Though this is somehow enigmatic to me, you stir my attention as always and I appreciate those thoughts about soul evolution.
You always are profound.
Love,
Margherita

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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2 posted 2007-09-06 01:11 PM


Hi Margherita - Well, that's just it - the farmer can't honour the "need" and it's okay to not want to even though knowing of another's want (vegetarians vs meat eaters).  That chicken on this planet earth which in a way contributes to the mess, is maybe saying that we have to step over the mess and become more soulful while still being ourselves.  Yep - it's okay to not want but it's not okay to deny the soul and refuse to give it life.    Hmm?  Suppose it's still a bit enigmatic but what is life without the mystery?  Bit of a preachy chicken, isn't it?  I apologize on its behalf.       
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-09-06 01:23 PM


Hi, Honey!

Not only did I enjoy your poem, I was fascinated by your reply to Margherita!

You are a poetess with some think in her ink!

Loving hug,
Linda

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
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4 posted 2007-09-06 02:42 PM


  Linda, you make me smile.  Maybe we've got to pay attention to our thoughts and feelings because, really, at the end of the day they are all we can truly own.  It's like looking after a house, car, etc., only, I think, very much more important. Hmm? Cleaning a car is perhaps like cleaning a mind - not long before it's a mess again.  
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