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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989


0 posted 2007-09-04 04:53 PM




Amber reflections
of sunsets glow
steadily sinking  
    lower
over the horizon

     where your dreams lie

I see mirrored images
   through your eyes
of hope floating
upon waves of courage
that come    crashing down

   resulting the same
   strength is gained

         and the dreams
            of soul
       remain

holding closely,
sights unseen
  mystical moments
     in twilights gleam

whispers of love
on gentle breeze
the unknown touch
     a silent tease

simplistic innocence

grasping keys
of mysteries

'tis a magical life
when the world is seen

through your eyes...



after a fall I get back up,
move on 'cause the past is the past and theres no tomorrow if remaining in still waters while the river flows on ~dsmith

© Copyright 2007 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-09-04 05:31 PM


Wonderful...James
MoonShadow
Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.
2 posted 2007-09-04 09:26 PM


"'tis a magical life
when the world is seen

through your eyes..."

Beautiful words and sentiment, Donna.
  And when we see ourselves through the loving eyes
    of another the view is spectacular.

          MoonShadow
.

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2007-09-04 10:43 PM


“Amber reflections
of sunsets glow
steadily sinking  
    lower
over the horizon

     where your dreams lie”

Love this verse.
JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

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