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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-09-04 06:33 AM

the quiet of lovely sometimes
leaves my hands gloveless in winter
with the craving colors of warm
just out of reach beyond windows
with a dancer in decal gowns

or is it my eyes are too loud
journeying with your limbs
for my mind to hear you speak
even lip gloss whispering
close to a statue's stone

do you fear filling a dream
with your soul river stanzas
or crushing the leaves of my shirt
with your breast weight freedom
while wearing my arm sleeve tattoos

are our souls only known there
where the gods of parking lots
make pens for them out of white
and back us in opposite lines
so you can look the other way

and I can only see you from behind

______________

daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-05-2007 06:34 AM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-09-04 07:06 AM

quote:
do you fear filling a dream
with your soul river stanzas

Absolutely captivating poem! Special atmospheres are rendered so very well.

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2007-09-04 08:04 AM

Whatever it is
it goes well with
the morning brew...

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2007-09-04 08:52 AM

"the quiet of lovely sometimes
leaves my hands gloveless in winter
with the craving colors of warm
just out of reach beyond windows"

this hits perfectly for me this morning....

loved it!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2007-09-04 10:39 AM

Hi DS

Your eyes ARE loud...how else would they see the way they do and write poetry about it? You are uniquely you, and that's a good thing!

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2007-09-04 03:33 PM

You and unique fit together so smoothly D...one could say it is a perfect fit. Enjoyed your words here today, seems like mosey town is a cool place, the world needs more of those kind eh? Hugs Big Daddy

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

6 posted 2007-09-05 02:51 AM

Well, you got me again.

You kind of take my attention and bring me back to your poems again and again.

And, I like it.

A

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2007-09-05 06:30 AM

ms margherita, thank you so much for touching and "seeing".

___________

ms sun, thank you lady friend

_____________

ms suesea, thank you for leaning over and looking at my eyes here

______________

ms martie, thank you lil neighbor for leaning over the fence and waving

_____________

ms gs, thank you donna for the whispers

____________

ms az, you make my pen smile, thanks babe

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