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Will_Rhyme
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0 posted 2007-09-03 05:34 PM



Now the night-time steals away,
as timid morning swirls
the floating mists, the ripened corn,
the chimney smoke in curls.
                                
Dew-covered grass asparkle
in the infant light.
Golden leaves glide softly
toward the ground, in silent flight.
                                
The Maple and the Blackoak,
each catch a yellow ray...
their tops explode in red and orange
and shout out, "Autumn Day".

© Copyright 2007 Will Rhyme - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2007-09-03 07:36 PM


What a glorious Autumn dawn ~ and day! Will, I loved this sparkling little poetic gem of yours!

Giving you a warm, autumnal hug,

EA

Martie
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2 posted 2007-09-03 07:41 PM


Hello Will......reading the imagery in this  autumn poem has helped cool me in the heat of this summer day.  Thank you.  
Will_Rhyme
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3 posted 2007-09-03 08:35 PM


Thnaks for taking time to comment.
ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2007-09-03 09:22 PM


Autumn with sentiment!
Enjoyed your write.

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-09-03 09:25 PM


Wonderful...James
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6 posted 2007-09-05 11:57 PM


Quality Poem !!!!!!! downright beautiful images : ) ~wolfy

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

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