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A Beautiful Disaster
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0 posted 2007-09-03 01:10 PM


Seconds

Another sleepless winter night...
I'm counting seconds, all alone.
Obscure, just like the candle's light,
Are dreams of what is still unknown.

And, waiting for the dawn coming,
I hear your voice through misty thoughts.
My heart is torn; it's bleeding - loving,
And left unsaid is just one word.

The pearls of lonely, genuine tears
Are sadness only you can see.
I need, like air to breathe, to hear
You still believe... believe in me.

You're close and far; it's sweet and bitter,
My strength is you - your sorrow's mine.
My poison turns to something sweeter
With every glance of dear eyes.

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-09-03 04:30 PM


"You still believe...believe in me."
Wonderful...James

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
2 posted 2007-09-03 04:42 PM



"You're close and far; it's sweet and bitter,
My strength is you - your sorrow's mine.
My poison turns to something sweeter
With every glance of dear eyes. "

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far yet near
your voice, I wish to hear it clear

Lovely...wonderfully expressed

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2007-09-03 09:28 PM


"waiting for the dawn coming,
I hear your voice through misty thoughts.
My heart is torn"

Beautiful poetry.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

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