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Open Poetry #41

Away My Sweet

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-09-01 05:53 PM

Away My Sweet

I miss all
those times
when you
were close
so soft
so sweet.

I feel like
a part of
my heart
is missing
everytime
you're away
my sweet.

JamesLee
01September
2007

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2007-09-01 08:23 PM

Very romantic James but you've always been that way and I think that's great!

Eric

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2007-09-03 04:19 AM

Nice James.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-09-03 03:31 PM

Thank you ethome and JL for the nice responses...James

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

4 posted 2007-09-05 01:22 PM

beautifully penned.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-09-05 05:47 PM

I appreciate your response marcel...James

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