Open Poetry #41 |
Trying To Find |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Staying here, Out of reach, Looking and trying to understad, Why you left me? And gone away, Looking for another day to shine, And chasing the clouds Of yesterday's gone, Trying to find, Trying to control myself, Don't know why? Life is only here for short time, Trying to believe, Every single word you said, Before you left me, Trying to understand, Ech everything of my broken hear, Trying to reach to our love, Trying to say the things, Should have done and said earlier, But now, It's too late, You are out of reach Trying to understand, Trying to your love.... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Vandana- Very powerful words I see in this poem, could you tell me more about, what this means ! ARCTIC WIND |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
It's as if you have opened a window to your heart. hugs, A |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sad when it doesn't work out...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Looking for another day to shine, And chasing the clouds Of yesterday's gone, Trying to find, May your reaching be successful, dear Vandana. Loved the outpour of your heart. Love, Margherita |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
I really feel emotion in this poem. Well written. Gumpy Heartbroken |
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