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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2007-09-01 09:18 AM



Artist: Cyn McCurry

Siren Songs
~ Linda L. Dowd ~

I was borne from the seed of Achelous.
On zephyrs, my songs sail o’er seas.
I pine for my playmate Persephone,
And been wailing her loss ~ centuries.

No seafarer shall e’er escape me.
I shall seduce him with my siren songs.
Lulling to sleep the unsuspecting,
~ The briny deep is where man belongs.

Persephone, Persephone, where are you?
I search and I search without end.
Forever I mourn your disappearance,
~ My companion, a sister, my friend.

I was borne from the seed of Achelous.
On zephyrs, my songs sail o’er seas.
I pine for my playmate Persephone,
And been wailing her loss ~ centuries.


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© Copyright 2007 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Bronzeage
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1 posted 2007-09-01 10:12 AM


Very nice work. I love the imagery.
Margherita
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2 posted 2007-09-01 10:21 AM


There is such fascination in mythology and you, dear Linda, with this delightful Siren Song have added some fresh paint to the centuries-old stories.
Bravo, you are so very eclectic in your inspirations, dear Poetess.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Honeybunch
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3 posted 2007-09-01 02:11 PM


Yes, siren songs will do it everytime!  
Lovely, Linda.

A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2007-09-01 03:12 PM


Love hearing those siren songs,
your poems are always a pleasure
to read and enjoy.

Love and hugs

ARH

TomMark
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5 posted 2007-09-01 03:56 PM


very touching. Beautiful as always
enjoyed very much

Tomtoo

sweetbomb
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6 posted 2007-09-01 04:43 PM


It feels like a light, cool, refreshing breeze. Liked it. D
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2007-09-01 08:37 PM


Bronzeage ~

Thank you!



EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-02-2007 10:25 AM).]

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2007-09-02 01:17 PM


Margherita ~

"Eclectic" ~ That's me, alright! ~ In everything I do! lol Variety's the spice of life! It keeps me from getting bored with myself!

Love to you!
Linda

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2007-09-02 01:19 PM


Bunches of Honey ~

Siren songs can be so sweet! ~ But they can be deadly! Cover your ears if you chance to hear one! lol

Loving hug,
Linda

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2007-09-02 01:20 PM


ARH ~

...as are yours!

Thank you!

EA

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11 posted 2007-09-02 01:23 PM


TomMark ~

Thank you for saying so, TomToo!

Hugs to you, this fine day! (Well, it is where I live! )

EA

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2007-09-02 01:28 PM


sweetbomb ~

Oooo! That sounds sooo nice! Merci beaucoups!

Hugs to you!
EA

JL
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13 posted 2007-09-03 04:12 AM


Nice...
Very nice.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

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14 posted 2007-09-03 08:31 AM


Most Captivating, Linda.

    MoonShadow
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vandana
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15 posted 2007-09-03 01:59 PM


good read
MyEnchanted_Melody
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16 posted 2007-09-03 04:57 PM




Wonderful...
I've always been enchaneted with mythology and now here you are writing it so nicely and captivatingly.

Thank you

Will_Rhyme
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17 posted 2007-09-03 05:35 PM


very pretty writing  EA   ...even tho I  don't know  some of  the words...lol...Thanks
Earth Angel
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18 posted 2007-09-03 06:31 PM


JL ~

Your "nice" is nice ~ and your "very nice" is very nice! lol

Hugs to you Tex Man!
EA

Earth Angel
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19 posted 2007-09-03 06:32 PM



MS



EA


Earth Angel
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20 posted 2007-09-03 06:33 PM


vandana ~

I'm pleased that you think so! Thank you!


EA

Earth Angel
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21 posted 2007-09-03 06:38 PM


ME_M ~

My love for Greek Mythology began in Grade 9 ~ and many a moon ago, that be! lol

There are many stories ~ and theories ~ regarding the sirens and I am fascinated by them all.


Warm hug,
EA

Earth Angel
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22 posted 2007-09-03 06:42 PM


Will_Rhyme ~

I got a little chuckle out of your self-effacing reply! lol

~ Would you care to hear me sing?

Hugs to you, W_R!

EA

The Lady
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23 posted 2007-09-03 10:11 PM



your Siren Songs carry far Linda Angel
they arrived on the wind

beautiful

iliana
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24 posted 2007-09-04 01:07 AM


I hear you, you Siren you.....that really carried the song with it, Linda.  KBHBLY.......lily jo
CastleGuard
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25 posted 2007-09-04 01:14 AM



Time to brush up on my Greek mythology.

I think I just have...

Well done.

CG

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26 posted 2007-09-04 01:33 AM


Lady Kate ~

I'm delighted that my siren songs carried all the way to The Southwest!

Hugs to you, LK

LA

Earth Angel
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27 posted 2007-09-04 01:36 AM


iliana ~

You know me so well, lily jo!

I can't be an 'angel' all of the time! lol

KBHBLY 2

Linda Louise the Siren

Earth Angel
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CG ~

Hi, there! So nice to hear from you, my fellow Canadian!

Cute reply!

Hugs to you!
EA

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29 posted 2007-09-04 11:03 PM


You rite good
Now kin I haf a moonshyne man?

Loverly, Lady.

A

Earth Angel
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30 posted 2007-09-05 12:45 PM


aziza ~

Hi, Alison! You want another "moonshyne" man! I would have thought that the moonshiner redneck from Hog Yellers Bog that I sent you, would have kept ya toooo busy to be wantin' another one! Sheeesh! Some wimen jest cain't get enuff of that kinda lovin'!  lol

Hugs 'n glugs to ya!

Lindy Lula Belle

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31 posted 2007-09-14 04:34 PM


i am leaving to Australia for a bit and i just wanted to say

beautiful poem


Earth Angel
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32 posted 2007-09-17 11:44 PM


Chosen ~

Thank you! ~ and bon voyage!


EA

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