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Open Poetry #41

Misses Sincere

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-09-01 07:29 AM

Misses Sincere

Perhaps one of the
best things about her
was her sincerity.
Although for the
longest time I
didn't believe
it to be so.
Finally, her troubled
heart was able to let
the truth come out
of a sincere but
hesitant mouth.
My heart was thrilled
to learn that her
sincerity was real.
For her and I
new Chapters full
of desire to begin.
A love story
that appears to
be no where
near its end.

JamesLee
01September
2007

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2007-09-01 07:45 AM

Keep those pages turning James ... it's wonderful to have a story with no end. Loved that line.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Bronzeage
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since 2007-07-20

Posts 197

2 posted 2007-09-01 10:20 AM

Very good read.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2007-09-01 10:25 AM

Sincerity is indeed an important ingredient of a love story and it is nice to discover that trust has been well placed.

Well done, James.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-09-01 04:54 PM

Thank you Kit, Bronzeage and Margherita for the wonderful responses...James

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2007-09-03 04:08 AM

Nice James.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

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