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Ache Of Love (With Voice/listen MP3) by request

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A Romantic Heart
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MP3 Ache Of Love
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Ache Of Love

Empty is the ache
that pains deep
within my chest,

Voice I long to hear,
such sweet intoxication
soothing my ear,

Makes me happy and blessed,

Hungry for your laughter,
I sit, starving, wanting
to eat of your mind,

Eat you up like a wolf,
stomache growling,
it's dinnertime,

Let me feast upon you,
every part of you,
I must devour,

For then, I become,
a love thirsty,
vampire,

Oh, the longing,the desire,
It burns within me,
a flame, your love ignites
my fire,

Mourning like a dove,
cooing lonely sorrow,
I am lost without your love,
Hope comes new,
with each tomorrow,

Nothingness, silence,
a void, dark existance,
an empty space,
where you should be,
beside me,

Holding my hand,
kissing my fingers,
my neck, ever so gently,
your eyes on mine,
two lives combine,

My arms inside yours,
sweet love warming us,
all over from head to toe,
You know, you are the other half,
to my soul,

I cannot breathe one breath,
without you any longer,
Oh, this ache grows stronger....

Come my love,
come to me,
breathe love into my soul,


So that I might live,
being completly loved,
becoming whole,

let not my heart die,
from being apart,
For then do I,
have only, half a heart,

Blind I walk alone,
for you are my eyes,
I miss you darling,
so deeply I miss you,

Let the heavens of blue,
hear my lonely crys,
for death would be but a blessing
in disquise,

Than to live without,
your love in my life,

Soothe my ache,
come lay your love balm,
upon my wounds,

Pour it thick,
lay it all over,
heal, soothe this ache,

Please my love , Please,
before my heart does break,

Bare your mind and soul,
deep into me, brand me with
your love, so I , like dove,
will be set free,

Oh this ache of Love,
this ache of love,

Is killing me......


We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard





© Copyright 2007 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 09-01-2007 08:21 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Oh, the beauty of your words, the music and your sweet plaintiff voice, were exceptionally moving. In fact, I want to go back and experience it all over again! Well done!


EA
A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 09-01-2007 03:16 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

WOW! Thanks Linda, I needed the encouragement as of late.

It would be nice to hear
other poets reciteing
their poems as well on here!

I would love to hear you
especially with that
Canadian voice!

Love and Hugs
ARH
JamesMichael
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3 posted 09-03-2007 08:00 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I know the feelings of having half a heart...feeling like a part of my heart is missing...you have presented this wonderfully...
When I am apart, I try to focus on the value of love, the lessons of love that can be learned, the joy and grace of love that abounds inside a heart, even though physically alone love has no boundaries...James
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4 posted 09-04-2007 12:47 AM       View Profile for CastleGuard   Email CastleGuard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CastleGuard


ARH - 'twas good to hear this....again.

CG
MoonShadow
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5 posted 09-04-2007 12:50 AM       View Profile for MoonShadow   Email MoonShadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MoonShadow

Milly... well done in print and performance.
       Thank you for sharing in such a wonderful way.

            MoonShadow
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iliana
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6 posted 09-04-2007 12:51 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

ARH -- Now this was ROMANTIC!!!  Loved the background music (one of my favorite pieces of music btw).  The sript is lovely, too -- wish I knew all that html stuff.  *hugs*...jo
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7 posted 09-04-2007 09:58 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Lovely presentation, both written and spoken.  Well done sweetie.
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8 posted 09-04-2007 08:41 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

ARH,

Well that was so sweet. I remember that voice so clearly, It was a pleasure to have you again, I mean hear you.
Love that accent, it makes that enticing side of the poem so much more more... well warm.

More Please.

Parker  
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9 posted 09-04-2007 10:22 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

this is lovely
gosh i wish i could do this too
my brooklyn accent would be quite a
different color from yours though
Parker
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Oh, yeah we've got to hear that brooklyn accent in a poem.
JL
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11 posted 09-04-2007 10:34 PM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

Beautiful read.
JL


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12 posted 09-05-2007 06:10 AM       View Profile for Honeybunch   Email Honeybunch   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Honeybunch's Home Page   View IP for Honeybunch

Oh, Wow!  Beautiful, sad, loving, sensuous, and just everything rolled into one.  A pleasure to hear you and that ache, yes, many know it well but here you write and speak it best.
Kit McCallum
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13 posted 09-05-2007 06:21 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Beautiful, ARH!  What a treasure to hear the words spoken as they were intended to be read.

It's so great to "hear" your voice accompany your piece ... really well done, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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14 posted 09-09-2007 09:33 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

nice write
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15 posted 09-12-2007 11:01 PM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

ARH

I set up my speakers just so I could hear this.  You caught my eye as the first to combine voice and music (I may have missed others .. not sure) -- and I wanted to hear yours first.

I listned twice in a row.  This is beautiful.  I have enjoyed your poetry, but to hear you read it .. well, it is an amazingly beautiful experience.

Back to the top of the first page you go.  You deserve to be there a long time.

Well written.  Well read.  Well done!

Thank you,
Alison
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Thank you..all of you, I am greatly humbled by your words, especially Allison who set up speakers to hear little ole me?

My goal is to tocuh the reader in a way, that makes them feel something they have never felt
before, reaching deep inside and making them feel and see the world different. To feel my love, my passion, as if it is coming right off the page.
If I have succeeded in that, I am rewarded from your replies!

Glad you listened, I will try to do another one...I am working with James at the moment for his poem...hopefully it will sound as beautiful as his poetry!

WARM HUGS~and.....


You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss
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17 posted 09-13-2007 08:01 PM       View Profile for Chosen one   Email Chosen one   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chosen one

BEAUTIFUL POETRY  A ROMANTIC HEART!
it was nice to here your voice


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18 posted 09-13-2007 08:08 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

ARH,
That was a first for me and I confess to enjoying your presentation. Thanks for going the extra mile. Well done.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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19 posted 09-14-2007 07:44 AM       View Profile for Chosen one   Email Chosen one   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chosen one

ARH,

this poem is very well done, and i think this is your best one so far. i know i have already replied, but go up to the top, you deserve it

Smiles  
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20 posted 09-14-2007 08:02 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Chosen one...you are like magic, appearing out of the blue...a true angel...thank you !

~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

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Larry..going the extra mile..well..that is what I am all about! LOL!

Hugs~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

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Pray for encouragement..and God sends his angels to the rescue!

Chosen...I hope to see that website of yours, and some of your work as well!

You have me anticipating the first post from you!

(i take a bow to your compliments)

Heartfelt thanks!

HUGS~ARH


You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss
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ARH!

Again i wish to raise you higher than others,

this poem is a blessing , and i wish that you post more with your voice!

with hugs and smiles

Chosen One
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24 posted 09-15-2007 03:23 PM       View Profile for paradise islands   Email paradise islands   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for paradise islands

a romantic heart-


this poem was so sweet and talk about sexy!
i love this poem, how gentile your voice is.
please do add more poems with your voice

sincerely

paradise islands
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