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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2007-08-31 08:22 PM


    Ghost-poet Lake
   (dreams live on!)

Fine inverted mountains…
trimmed in azurine mist,
caress the fleeting Autumn
  twilight
and dance in clear-ripple
  harmony
to the loon’s plaintive song,
across a lake where ‘poet-
  dreams’
pass trailing wisps of time
and remain forever young,
when we cast no shadows
in the bright moonlight.
              ~

© Copyright 2007 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
TomMark
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1 posted 2007-09-01 03:17 AM


Absolutely beautiful.
enjoyed the read

Margherita
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2 posted 2007-09-01 12:01 PM


Awesome! What else can one say when goosebumps prickle?

Love,
Margherita

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Gaia
3 posted 2007-09-01 08:06 PM


quote:
where ‘poet-
  dreams’
pass trailing wisps of time
and remain forever young,
when we cast no shadows
in the bright moonlight.
              ~


There is no line between us...and the shadows
for in truth, we are one and the same.

ArtSolstice
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4 posted 2007-09-01 09:23 PM


It is good to see you posting here again. This is beautiful and as always, enjoyed, especially

   "(dreams live on!)"

and the fine landscape painted here.

Sunshine
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5 posted 2007-09-01 09:51 PM


and Golden Ponds lives on...

long live the Loon!


aziza
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6 posted 2007-09-04 11:08 PM


Beautiful.

You have taken me on a wonderful poetic journey.

A

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