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sweetbomb
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since 2007-08-07
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0 posted 2007-08-31 07:07 PM


Because The Cement Might Get Wet

Standing in her cement filled shoes
The world keeps passing by
It never stops and says, hi
So she waves as it passes
And sometimes she wants to cry
But the world passing by
Never sees her cry
Because the cement might get wet
And crumble.  

De Anna Lane Aston

copyright 2007


[This message has been edited by sweetbomb (08-31-2007 08:52 PM).]

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Bronzeage
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since 2007-07-20
Posts 197

1 posted 2007-09-01 10:18 AM


You have a sad tone to this piece, but I enjoyed reading it.
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2007-09-01 12:09 PM


Cute!

Love,
Margherita

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