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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Glare By: Noah Eaton 8/1/05 The dream was always running ahead of me, you’ll feel less with every little bit more you see, tonight I feel revirginated staring up into space, feeling like I haven’t seen anything... ...your forehead was kissed by firefly sonata, made you a precious day-glo tiara, each blinking star between each young kiss, challenging the Fermi paradox... ...I feel as though I’ve lost my legs, but, baby, you make me brave enough to go ahead… ...up and away… ...up and away… Ooohhh, it’s love at first sight, every time I see you… ...gleaming in the glittering glare… Chocolate daisies must have called your name, tutored with mignonettes in the summer rain, foo fighters flicker like opaline snow owls, groping the world in a snowblink of involuntary praise... ...from the touch of your fingertips, we’re sparkling amidst this total solar eclipse, there’s polyphony between every heartbeat, and in this moment there’s pure clairsentience... ...I feel as though I’ve lost my legs, but, baby, you make me brave enough to go ahead... ...up and away... ...up and away... Ooohhh, it’s love at first sight, every time I see you... ...gleaming in the glittering glare... Ooooohhhh... ooooohhhh... ooooohhhh... ...it’s when two look at each other beyond three winks, that it all becomes a miracle, sweet darling... Ooohhh, it’s love at first sight, ooohhh, it’s love at first sight, every time I see you… ...gleaming in the glittering glare... Infinity’s in the palm of your hand, but forever rests in the stardust of each eyelash, each hot youthful tear I will collect, lathering your face in glare with my heart’s content... "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Noah, how truly dazzling this is! Emotion renewed at every new meeting is fantastic. I enjoy your LOVE ENERGY characterizing every single word. Love, Margherita  |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was Great!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"gleaming in the glittering glare" ~ love that alliteration! Angel Man, you don't need "legs" ~ you have wings to take you anywhere you would like to go!  This was tender, sweet, and full of youthful exuberance. I truly enjoyed this spill from your heart-pen. Lucky be she who wins your love. Linda  |
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