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MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2007-08-31 12:27 PM



“My Soul Complete”
(Triolet)

With Her I feel my soul complete.
She fills my heart with song and love.
The air I breathe and life is sweet.
With Her I feel my soul complete.

She’s by my side, there’s no defeat.
Swear by the moon and stars above.
With Her I feel my soul complete.
She fills my heart with song and love.

MoonShadow
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© Copyright 2007 Kenneth W. Myers - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-08-31 06:17 AM


Enjoyed...James
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2007-08-31 08:03 AM


Mr. Moon,

   Completeness is one soul split into two halves, finding the other to become whole once more!

after admiring your fine display of affection, I feel complete...

RH..Milly

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2007-08-31 08:19 AM


This is the only kind of love that love should ever be gentle Kenneth.  Nicely done sir moonshadow.

after a fall I get back up,
move on 'cause the past is the past and theres no tomorrow if remaining in still waters while the river flows on ~dsmith

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2007-08-31 01:44 PM


    
MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
5 posted 2007-08-31 08:02 PM



sweet...
and makes one long to have his soul complete

Thank you for sharing


"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of

TomMark
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6 posted 2007-09-01 03:23 AM


enjoyed.
Tomtoo

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2007-09-03 07:49 PM


MS, I would wager my proverbial wings, that any woman loved by a man who writes words such as these, would surely have a heart filled with song and would feel that her soul is complete as well.


EA

The Lady
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8 posted 2007-09-03 10:30 PM



gentle Sir MoonShadow
I would have to agree with Linda Angel

MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
9 posted 2007-09-04 12:36 PM


James... Thank you for the read.

Milly... I believe Love is 'one soul inhabiting two bodies' but the gist is the same, Yes? Glad you catch the feeling. Thank you for the wonderful graphics. Perhaps one day I'll learn how to add them too.

            MoonShadow
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MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
10 posted 2007-09-04 12:37 PM


Donna... For me it is the only kind.
          Thank you for your sweet words.

My Enchanted Melody... You are welcome.
           Thank you for the read.

       MoonShadow
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MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
11 posted 2007-09-04 12:39 PM


Tom... Thanks for the read. Glad you enjoyed.

Linda... I would never bet against an Angel..
         and I wish it so with all my heart.

Milady Kate... I am please you agree.
          Thank you for your sweet response.

           MoonShadow
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CastleGuard
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12 posted 2007-09-04 12:55 PM



MoonShadow,

Two souls as one...a bridge that connects two hearts.

Well done.

CG

LindsayP
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13 posted 2007-09-05 12:09 PM



Lovely words Moonshadow, I read it and reread it, great poem. LindsayP

iliana
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14 posted 2007-09-05 02:03 AM


Nice triolet!
MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
15 posted 2007-09-06 11:52 AM


CastleGuard... So true. Thank you for the read.

Lindsay... Thank you for your kind response.

       MoonShadow
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MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
16 posted 2007-09-06 11:53 AM


Iliana... Thank you for the read and response.
      
          MoonShadow
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