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MindBodySoul
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0 posted 2007-08-31 12:07 PM


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Hmmm I wonder …..
Why you’re not answering?
Are you really sleeping?
Is it that you are dreaming too deeply
That you don’t hear the ringing

Hmmm I wonder…..
Who you dream of as you sleep
Is it me, is it her, is it them
Are we all part of your dream?
Do you really loose yourself?
That you don’t hear the ringing

Hmmm I wonder….
Do you really fall asleep?
As you wonder in your dream…


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Margherita
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1 posted 2007-09-01 11:40 AM


Very intense questioning!

And astounding picture!

Enjoyed this.

Love,
Margherita

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2 posted 2007-09-05 10:12 PM


haha cool poem very cool ! a good question i cannot answer : ) ~J

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

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