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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. In the lambent light Off Frankfort Michigan Water ripples in shadows Of final green and blue With purple keels The late summer clouds Drift slowly across the sky Toward the West Our wooden boat With sails unfurled To catch what little breeze As the sun goes down And perhaps a dream To outlast the end of time . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I absorbed this picture and I felt it. Beautiful write, John. Love, Margherita |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY fine! I am especially fond of the ending: "As the sun goes down And perhaps a dream To outlast the end of time" sustained applause!! |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
very beautiful, sad though. Love the read. Tomtoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It is wonderful to see the poet's physiognomy!  A nocturne, well played out. ~ a pensive and lyrical piece with alluring ambiance. Love & Light, EA |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thank you all for reading John |
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