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Quietness |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I sought the quietness of God Drawing up from within me these restless pools By a river bank, emotions sank Into the ripples of whispering time Free from my heart this ache departs On the breezes of an ebbing August haze It has one name, that was carved into my being In the throws of rigors firm Yet life flows all the same But here, among bank swallow arms I fold into the feelings and the words And drop by drop My dreams fall into the hollow of your hand Copyright Kkh 8/30/07 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Soft, tender, humble...mysterious...awakening words that flow the river's edge. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
some things just can not be explained, just known i know you know this from the words you write |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Words so deep and poignant that make me sigh, dear TD. Love, Margherita  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful, TD! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I absolutely LOVE: “…emotions sank Into the ripples of whispering time(!)”; AND, the grand-fine ending!: “…life flows all the same But here, among bank swallow arms I fold into the feelings and the words And drop by drop My dreams fall into the hollow of your hand” Serious, sustained applause! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful! JL  Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
indeed, it is beautiful. love the read Tomtoo |
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