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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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It was the way you looked at me that one final time as if to say "this is the last time I will ask" and so I picked you up from somewhere within my hate drowned soul and laid you with your lovely lines onto white sheets with airbrused soft blue and tried so hard to make you beautiful meaningful. tried to bend you to my will before you took my hand to say "feel it. Don't force it" and you changed before my eyes creating yourself for me. and I wrote you with all the will to finally move past the stain of hate. Finally letting the real words back in reclaiming poetry. "I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Jenn...where have you been hiding...Enjoyed the read, lots of feel to it, good write. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful and in a way "healing". Nice to see you back! Love, Margherita |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Jennifer! And reclaim it you have. Welcome back...  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
jenjenjen welcome home !!!! |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Thanks everyone! Its great to be here writing, reading, and sharing again. Love ya'll! "I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real" |
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