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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2007-08-29 07:55 AM



This is the place
where our roads meet
in the twilight of our nights

It is here that I feel safe enough
to lean back into the arms that
cradle me in gentle, soft sway
of whispers wrapping around

fingertips entwined;
binding

    heart to heart

in soul touch

as the breath of dreams

   is lost

           in sigh.


What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us.  Ralph Waldo Emerson

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-29-2007 09:22 AM).]

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-08-29 08:02 AM


The breath of your words, just lost ME in sigh!

Gorgeous poem ~ and new pic! You both look fabulous!

Have a great day, Donna!

Love to you and a smooch for your pooch!

Linda

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2007-08-29 08:03 AM


Thanks sweetie.  This little guy isn't mine but I sure wish he was.  You have a great day too, Lil Angel.

after a fall I get back up,
move on 'cause the past is the past and theres no tomorrow if remaining in still waters while the river flows on ~dsmith

MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
3 posted 2007-08-29 08:06 AM



"This is the place
where our roads meet
in the twilight of our nights"

  Most Lovely, Donna. I have seen this place.
    I believe it is in the Shadow of the Moon.

             MoonShadow
.

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2007-08-29 08:08 AM


aahh Gentle Kenneth...     Thank you for being here this morning.  

after a fall I get back up,
move on 'cause the past is the past and theres no tomorrow if remaining in still waters while the river flows on ~dsmith

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2007-08-29 08:26 AM


Sounds like a special place...James
teddymarvelle
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california usa
6 posted 2007-08-29 09:54 AM


wow beautiful and deep.. not often found... thank you ... loved it
vandana
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7 posted 2007-08-29 12:23 PM


good read
The Lady
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8 posted 2007-08-30 12:01 PM




gentle Donna
these words entrance me

"It is here that I feel safe enough
to lean back into the arms that
cradle me in gentle, soft sway
of whispers wrapping around"

ladylisa
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9 posted 2007-08-30 10:15 AM


Yes this is a wonderful place.  I know it well.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
10 posted 2007-08-30 01:56 PM


What a gorgeous write, Donna!


secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
11 posted 2007-08-30 06:17 PM


most pleasant and fine Romantic 'write'!

serious applause!!

aziza
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12 posted 2007-08-31 11:13 AM


Most beautiful, lovely lady.
I got caught up in the whisper.

A

Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion
13 posted 2007-08-31 11:15 AM


yes indeed it is a lovely piece

I am the little cracked mirror

JL
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14 posted 2007-09-03 03:56 AM


"as the breath of dreams

   is lost

           in sigh."

Nice.

JL


Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
15 posted 2007-09-03 04:53 PM




Your own words seem more like soft whispers

Thank you

inkedgoddess
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16 posted 2007-09-05 04:55 PM


lost in sigh

breathlessly lovely.......

Gentle Spirit
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17 posted 2007-09-06 10:28 AM


Thank you all for the kindness of your comments.  I wish I could hug ya'll.

after a fall I get back up,
move on 'cause the past is the past and theres no tomorrow if remaining in still waters while the river flows on ~dsmith

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