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Open Poetry #41

moseytown inclined

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-08-29 06:27 AM

I always go there in my mind
down by the seacliff side of 1
where the road ends under a palm
and the ocean is always busy
being an ocean against the rocks

there are boulders for people backs
for sitting or standing occasions
hours or days could be acceptable
or just a moment with the right one
snap shot long enough for lifetimes

the wind is usually there too
moving your hair around
and you laugh at the gulls
how they wrestle over nothing
that is everything to their moments

I appreciate their distractions
so you don't notice my attraction
at least not immediately until time
lets you admire the warm of my arms
and find it ironic how the cave of me

seems to fit your shadow like a memory

____________

daark

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2007-08-29 07:24 AM

aahha mister, when you write like this it still makes me sigh. Your soft side is such a lovely thing to behold.

I so enjoy your words.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2007-08-29 07:33 AM

very much enjoyed this D

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

3 posted 2007-09-09 10:04 AM

Nice

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2007-09-09 10:10 AM

you have a way
of slipping it in
(your soft side yes

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

5 posted 2007-09-09 03:56 PM

This is beautiful.
Sometimes I read when I can not respond
and then think I did.

This is one of those poems.
I read it and fell in love with it
and now, it is here for my eyes again.

Thank you.
A

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2007-09-09 11:13 PM

Stranger Darlin'
I saw you there so often
in my mind
and now in my memory

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2007-09-10 06:31 AM

humble thanks ladies...it is a place friend of mine....

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