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WindWalker
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0 posted 2007-08-28 07:11 PM


Rising with the morning sun
my questing spirit soars,
hungry and keen sighted
as an eagle circling the dawn.

Here I enter a light dream,
walking weightless on soft moss
edging a greening meadow
and a gentle wind propels my spirit
to seek a new path of wisdom.

Here I taste of rejuvenation
to prolong my body's journey,
exchanging pain and sorrow
for joy outside of words..

Here, I celebrate the passing
of man's ancient night
and an aurora of light
flowing with ecstasy
awakens the vision within.

Here, I experience fully
the dawning of a new world
so long inaccessible
within hidden dimensions.

© Copyright 2007 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2007-08-28 07:20 PM


Simply grand!

I am especially fond of:

“Rising with the morning sun
my questing spirit soars,
hungry and keen sighted
as an eagle circling the dawn(!)”

Most serious and long-sustained applause!!

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2007-08-28 07:43 PM


"walking weightless on soft moss"
oh, this is a fine way
to greet dawn

MoonShadow
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3 posted 2007-08-28 08:21 PM


Mystically magnificent.

      MoonShadow
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The Lady
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4 posted 2007-08-28 11:28 PM




"walking weightless on soft moss
edging a greening meadow"

delightful WindWalker


JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-08-29 08:13 AM


Nice...James
Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2007-08-29 08:17 AM


oh WOW!     You have outdone yourself with this wise wonder.  Nicely done.  
teddymarvelle
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7 posted 2007-08-29 09:52 AM


i can tough taste smell and feel this environment of natue ... very nicely done
vandana
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8 posted 2007-08-29 12:23 PM


enjoyed
Marchmadness
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9 posted 2007-11-08 02:48 PM


Reading your poetry is always a joy, WindWalker.
                            Ida

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2007-11-10 12:27 PM


WW, your spiritual poems are among the best that I have ever read. Each one touches my soul and makes we want to fly! ~ with the wings of an eagle (angel wings aren't as aerodynamic! )

As the vision awakens within you, you show your readers "the dawning of a new world".

Love & Dawning Light,
EA

secondhanddreampoet
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11 posted 2007-11-10 10:18 PM


I was most happy to find this grand-fine 'write' back near the top of the 'P.I.P.-land' queue once again!

continuing  major applause!!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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12 posted 2007-11-10 10:19 PM


wonderful!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ThisDiamond
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13 posted 2007-11-11 09:29 AM


You write with vigor and hope.  So many striking lines, and I especially loved this one...

..."Here I taste of rejuvenation
to prolong my body's journey,
exchanging pain and sorrow
for joy outside of words.."...

Awesome!

secondhanddreampoet
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14 posted 2008-01-22 07:44 PM


one more encore!
ThisDiamond
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15 posted 2008-01-22 08:07 PM


Each and every line resonates.
Wonder full!

LindsayP
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16 posted 2008-01-22 08:07 PM



Very well written Wind Walker so much enjoyed

Lindsay

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