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Black Forest Moon
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Black Forest Moon |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Black Forest Moon Bright white moon luculent starlight black forest mystic mountains… a pensive river seeks the inscrutable sea (Bruce E. Adams Jr.) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, I like the "pensive river" and "inscrutable sea" |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
The path of the eye is marvelous in this poem. We start with focus on the moon, widen our focus to the stars, move down to the forest, the mountain, down further to the river, then out to the sea. We also move from light to dark, then into infinity. Fine choreography, fine words to match. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice writing...are you writing of the Black forest in Germany?...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I too imagined immediately the Schwarzwald... and then the Rhein and the North Sea ... Thank you for this trip in the magic of moonlight. Very lovely. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Seek and it shall find!  Simply stated ~ yet not so simple. Love & Moon Magic, Linda |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bruce~ My admiration for the LunaLady appreciates this very much~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
rivers always find the sea somehow, good write I am the little cracked mirror |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
wow!! Tomtoo |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a beautiful write as always poet and it suits my mood tonight |
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